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## The Bottom Line
-_If_ LinkedIn Intro works as built, and _if_ their security safeguards are put
-into place, then Intro exposes its users to much greater risk of password
-compromise and helps them expose themselves to surveillence, both government
-and private. If either of those conditions does not hold, it's worse.
+_If_ LinkedIn Intro works as built, and _if_ their security safeguards are as
+effective as they claim and hope, then Intro exposes its users to much greater
+risk of password compromise and helps them expose themselves to surveillence,
+both government and private. If either of those conditions does not hold, it's
+worse.
The software industry is young, and immature, and wealthy. There is no ethics
body to complain to; had the developers of Intro said "no", they would very